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Annoyingly, I have to change more of my essay than I initially thought I would. But at least the one on one feedback was really helpful, and I know how I can adapt it to improve for my final hand in. I think getting feedback is definitely key to a successful submission, because it's so easy just being in your own bubble without thinking things through properly.
I also started thinking more about my practical side. I think I'm going to look into advertising in different corporations and how in your face it is. Which I suppose is slightly the reasoning behind why I want to do pop up, because it's so in your face. But again I need to look into this further.